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[Blue's First Christmas]

Right, serious review time here, first and biggest issue would be the pacing. After a few watches, I realised you were probably trying to time it with the music track, but some shots seemed to hold for an uncomfortable amount of time, an example being the wide shot of Blue in front of the tree, it sort of ruins the flow to the story, especially a simple one like this which could be over in 30 seconds, rather than 50.
Other peeve of mine would be the differences in style, I know you're still experimenting with this style, so there's bound to be flaws, but the focus from the drawing style seems a lot more aimed towards the backgrounds than Blue himself, the backgrounds have a solid looking feel to them, while Blue (see the first shot) seems very stringy and loose, especially for a robot character.

And now for the good points, I think you introduced the AI idea well, although it makes it look as if Blue is in control of it, and outside of this video you've mentioned it more as an involuntary thing, making it look like Blue just has a short temper. I'd suggest looking up Zeurel's character "Spoiler" who is a split personality robot for reference to help develop the character further.
Also, I really liked the timing on the missile, I've noticed you seem to animate simple things a lot better, such as your stickman jump, where you put more focus into the physics, but when it comes to the actua detailed stuff, you seem to worry too much about the drawing, and the animation doesn't look as fluid, maybe make sure you're fully familiar with how Blue works by doing a few test clips like runs, jumps, interactions, etc. Also a character sheet for the 100% final design would be a good idea!

Anyway, been trying this review too long, just thought I'd give my pointers seeing as I've seen you develop this idea!

Vallhemn responds:

Aye, its been muchly helpful dude. I did think I was leaving the shots on for a tad too long, but I didn't know whether it was just because I'd seen it so many times. Lol. Thanks for the pointers as well, definitely gunna help finish off my animation style I think. :)

[Fake Wedding]

I don't get it

Twisted4000 responds:

He had a fake wedding set up, and she thought she was getting married but it was a trick.

[Life In A Nutshell]

Oh hey, bro. I know you love dicks, you tell me online how you're super passionate about them, but this has to stop. Why you gotta do this to me Frosty? Drawing a dick in a lovely playpark? On a ride? You want kids to ride on your...
Look, your cruel addiction has to stop bro, now you know I love ya, and I'm only giving you 5 stars because you paid me, but please, think of the children! (In a non sexual manner next time)

In all seriousness though man, animations getting nice, some pretty use of colours and the joke was really appreciated! I love the bug at the beginning, small touch but man it's purdy!
The sound peaks a bit when it zooms in to the obstacles, aside from that, not much wrong with it!
Seems like you've gotta take the same step as I have next, which is to stop just going from point A to B with your inbetweens and to make the whole thing one constant fluid motion. Aside from that, it's good to see you on front page, and I'll await more!
Now, I'll take my money over paypal if that's cool?

FrostDrive responds:

I'll transfer 50 dollas to your account once I'm done responding.
I'm going to put as many penises as I want in my animations though, I don't have to give a fucking fuck what your damn mouth has to say. ACTUALLY, in my next cartoon now, I'm gonna put a plethora of penises. I'm gonna put them receding into the horizon, and there ain't nothin' you can do about it boy.

TAKE YOUR KIDS BACK AND GET OUTTA MY LIFE. 'nuff said.

[Repercussions of Evil]

YESS!

Oh man, where to begin!
I remember reading the fanfic a while back, absolutely pissing myself at it, and I have to say, you've really captured the humour style, with everything! The badass looking character, the over-dramatic voices, everything...

The animation quality was quite a treat too!

Galneda responds:

Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked the animation! :D

[Bieber Eating a Twiglet]

Hooray for alcohol!

Oh I saw those Malteasers there boy....
It's funny though, the high pitched singing actually sounds like Bieber

Thundaboom responds:

your okay

[Leo & Satan II]

Sweet! like, err, shugur!

Seriously, the intro, Satan's personality and jokes, and the exposed entrepreneur, it just kicked arse!
Do we see more of our sugar selling friend in the future is we ask for it?

Oney responds:

yeah man you should be seeing more! ;D

[O Canada]

Meh

It still makes no sense to me, but the animation was pretty interesting, the characters were simplistic, but in their own awesomely see through way, it made them seem pretty likeable.

As for it making no sense, meh, even if it does or doesn't, it still has an amusing factor to it :)

Thundaboom responds:

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmhmmm

[Intro to My Life]

Great for a first try

THe animation started promising, but then for some reason the quality seemed to drop. It kinda went from style to style too, it would have all been better in the pencil style, before you started filling colours.

It was great for a first flash though, looks promising if you can keep it up like the start, I liked the rough feel to the movie :)

Good luck!

Prestokey responds:

Since this was my first flash, it was very experimental. I am working to get better, but thanks for the review.

[W40k Dawn of Awesome]

SPEHHS MEREENS!

I remember this scene :')
The SPEHHS MAREENS thing was amazing, just added to it, and I kept waiting for him to say it again

Battosai810 responds:

Glad you liked it :)

[Pokemon: Pee Red Version]

Amazing

Great jokes, great animation and GREAT voices
Congrats

OrangePylon responds:

I think the only non-positive word in that review was "and". Thanks. :)